Can we put like parts of songs and just don't finish it?

a song that my mother was working on that I motified:
"not a fight, but a war" by Cameron Cavern(motified version)

I didn't know... that someone could turn on you... that
it would burn you down.... but I got up and I stood tall...
knowing that my time will come to shine...

and I..... knew I couldn't trust at all.. knowing that the ones I looked up to the most.... that they.. would shove me in a hole... and leave me there to die... that they would kill a innocent child... that they would drug there most loyal fan.. the ones that held on to the thoughts.. that they would help.... and if theres one thing... I've learned.. it that.. this is not a fight... but a war for my life not a fight but a war for the truth and justice that could someone could bring...

and I would die to know that they would kill... that they have ruined so many lives and hearts.. and the ones that I could trust... hurt and decline all the plea's for help... that they didn't care at all...

(go to cho then 4th verse)

but my mama said, that if you die... knowing that you didn't try... you fought for no one... nothing.. and you made nothing better... that you would know... you couldn't show... them the truth... the justice that could've been brought....by you... and this is the truth(2 times on truth)





Got another U2 song.

Raised By Wolves

Face down on a broken street
There’s a man in the corner in a pool of misery
I’m in a white van as a red sea covers the ground
Metal crash I can’t tell what it is
But I take a look and now I’m sorry I did.
5:30 on a Friday night 33 good people cut down

I don’t believe anymore
I don’t believe anymore

Face down on a pillow of shame
There are some girls with a needle trying to spell my name
My body’s not a canvas
My body’s now a toilet wall

I don’t believe anymore
I don’t believe anymore

Raised by wolves
Stronger than fear
Raised by wolves
We were raised by wolves
Raised by wolves
Stronger than fear
If I open my eyes,
You disappear

Boy sees his father crushed under the weight
Of a cross in a passion where the passion is hate.
Blue mink Ford, I’m gonna detonate and you’re dead
Blood in the house,
Blood on the street
The worst things in the world are justified by belief
Registration 1385-WZ

I don’t believe anymore
I don’t believe anymore

Raised by wolves
Stronger than fear
Raised by wolves
We were raised by wolves
Raised by wolves
Stronger than fear
If I open my eyes,
You disappear

My lyrics
"Can't you see" (behind the smile)

You say im crazy
You say i got a problem
But you don't see whats on the inside

And so i smile, but that ain't the truth
You can't really belive it. Can't you see behind the smi-----le (oooh oooh)
Behind it all is a broken soul, behind the smi--------------------le behind it all.

And im breaking bit by bit, but people say ain't i lit! I guess im
Just not as ready as i though,
But can't you se-----------------e!

Im asking how i be me---------
Why im here
Why i sta------------------nd

And so i smile, but that ain't the truth
You can't really belive it. Can't you see behind the smi-----le (oooh oooh)
Behind it all is a broken soul, behind the smi--------------------le behind it all.

This time, I have a U2 song.

The Troubles

Somebody stepped inside your soul
Somebody stepped inside your soul
Little by little they robbed and stole
Till someone else was in control

You think it’s easier
To put your finger on the trouble
When the trouble is you
And you think it’s easier
To know your own tricks
Well, it’s the hardest thing you’ll ever do

I have a will for survival
So you can hurt me and hurt me some more
I can live with denial
But you’re not my troubles anymore

Somebody stepped inside your soul
Somebody stepped inside your soul
Little by little they robbed and stole
Till somebody else was in control

Somebody stepped inside your soul
Somebody stepped inside your soul
Little by little they robbed and stole
Till someone else was in control

You think it’s easier
To give up on the trouble
If the trouble is destroying you
You think it’s easier
But before you threw me a rope
It was the one thing I could hold on to

I have a will for survival
So you can hurt me then hurt me some more
I can live with denial
But you’re not my troubles anymore

Somebody stepped inside your soul
Somebody stepped inside your soul
Little by little they robbed and stole
Till someone else was in control

Somebody stepped inside your soul
Somebody stepped inside your soul
Little by little they robbed and stole
Till someone else was in control

God knows it’s not easy
Taking on the shape of someone else’s pain
God now you can see me
I’m naked and I’m not afraid
My body’s sacred and I’m not ashamed

Somebody stepped inside your soul
Somebody stepped inside your soul
Little by little they robbed and stole
Till someone else was in control

Somebody stepped inside your soul
Somebody stepped inside your soul
Little by little they robbed and stole
Till someone else was in control

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FOB, AGAIN!

"What A Catch, Donnie"

I got troubled thoughts
And the self-esteem to match
What a catch, what a catch

You'll never catch us
So just let me be
Said I'll be fine
Till the hospital or American Embassy
Miss Flack said I still want you back
Yeah, Miss Flack said I still want you back

I got troubled thoughts
And the self-esteem to match
What a catch, what a catch
And all I can think of
Is the way I'm the one
Who charmed the one
Who gave up on you
Who gave up on you

They say the captain
Goes down with the ship
So, when the world ends
Will God go down with it?
Miss Flack said I still want you back
Yeah, Miss Flack said I still want you back

I got troubled thoughts
And the self-esteem to match
What a catch, what a catch
And all I can think of
Is the way I'm the one
Who charmed the one
Who gave up on you
Who gave up on you

What a catch
What a catch
What a catch
What a catch

[Elvis Costello:]
I will never end up like him
Behind my back, I already am
Keep a calendar
This way you will always know

I got troubled thoughts
And the self-esteem to match
What a catch, what a catch
And all I can think of
Is the way I'm the one
Who charmed the one
Who gave up on you
Who gave up on you

[Gabe Saporta:]
Where is your boy tonight?
I hope he is a gentleman
Maybe he won't find out what I know
You were the last good thing
[Travis McCoy:]
We're going down, down in an earlier round
And sugar, we're goin' down swinging
[Brendon Urie:]
Dance, dance, we're falling apart to halftime
Dance, dance, and these are the lives you'd love to lead
Dance, this is the way they'd love
If they knew how misery loved me
[Doug Does:]
This ain't a scene, it's a goddamn arms race
This ain't a scene, it's a goddamn arms race
[Alex DeLeon:]
One night and one more time
Thanks for the memories
Even though they weren't so great
He tastes like you, only sweeter
[William Beckett:]
Growing up, growing up

I got troubled thoughts
And the self-esteem to match
What a catch, what a catch

A song I wrote

Lumberjack
By: +Howlingwolf04 the wolf that is a cat​​


(Chorus)

I'm a lumberjack and that's okay
I sleep all night and work all day



You better hide your wood you better hide your trees because if I see them they will be gone because I'm lumberjack and that's my thing lumberjacks are cool cause they get to make every thing out of woo-------------------------------d

(Chorus)




I'll find it I'll find them I can smell it now give them to me or you become my wood

((Not done but there you go))

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Here's a son I'm working on. Its mine, no stealy, I dont care if you sing/play it just give me credit

"You're the one who's missing out"
By; Marciline

C. G. F.
C. G. Am
(a bunch of dum dum da da doo, stuff like that)
(repeat throughout entire song
C. G. F
C. G. Am
(x3)C. G. Am. F )
(for chorus
C. G. Am. F (x5))


Why don't they like me
Why doesn't anyone want to hangout with me
Its just they're faul, because they're the ones who are missing out
Even though you see me as the rejected one who was kicked out
Oh, well how inconvenient for you!

Chorus
Well that's not My fault! You're the one disrespecting me!
And you're the one who leaves me out of everything.
Oh am I just your problem? Well then i will have much fun
When i leave you in the dust
When you see that I've got something to say



That's all I have so far, I will probably add on more later though.
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Here's a song I've been working on. It's called
"Flashback." This is all my work, so please don't steal it. +foxxeru kanine you have my permission to sing it and post it on YouTube. But, I need help to finish it first. Please, anysuggestions would help me.

Woah, I'm thinking back on my past
Wonderin' if you're ever gonna be back
'Cause I don't wanna see you anymore
Tired of seein' you on my porch

(Chorus)

Maybe it it was just a flashback
Maybe it was just a dream
But I swear I saw you a few miles back
But you know what they say
Things are never..... what..... they seem

(end of chorus)

Been thinkin' about you a lot today
What did i do? What will you say?
I don't want you back for what you did to me
I didn't wanna see.... the monster you'd become

(Repeat chorus)

That's all I have for now.... I need help to finish it... Please, any suggestions will help me.
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