Don't see anything recent? I was hoping to get a review on one of my scripts?

Hellooooooo,

anyone up for a good reading ???

I've 1st drafted a script, and I think it might be a bit wordy.
My friends, (((those yes men))) say it's fine. . . .buuuut then again, they're all "yes men"  ((It's a joke fellas, lighten up)))
So, I'll post up the  first act, if anyone is up to some reading and critiquing.

Lemme know

Cheers !!

me

Welcome to the Critique Area.

Post any scripts, fully complete/half complete.  Or just any scenes that you want help with.

Including style of theatre, etc. will help for any feedback.
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