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have you ever looked death in the face? he writes on misted glass the letters running like tears, "no" the sound escapes like air from a balloon i thought not i hear his laugh it's mocking and dangerous. don't scream, i'm not dead. i just need to tell someone before i forget i was human, i'm a shade he frowns NO! they're a shade. luke, luke, my name was luke, is luke. enough banter, this is my story he finishes writing the sentence with a flourish "it started when snow white the daughter of the white queen was born, the white queen didn't survive the night." his voice is raw and as dangerous as his laugh, the silencing spell is gone "the king was devastated but, he married again, for snows sake. it seems his choice was ill advised for when the king died many years later his bride queen red ordered me to kill snow white. you think it cruel, do you not?" he asks but he is not seeking an answer "i did not kill the girl, instead i left her to the mercy of the forest. when i returned, the queen was waiting for me with the mirror, i presented the queen a pigs heart claiming it was snows heart, red believed me till her talk with the mirror 'mirror, mirror, on the wall who is the fairest of them all?' she asked, to my horror the mirror replied ' you are fair my queen but fairer still is snow white through the forest and over the hill' the queen stormed out, forgetting i was there. she locked the door, i was trapped" his blood red eyes stare into my hazel ones, dark and dangerous he could kill me if he got out of his glass cage "the mirror spoke to me 'sir night, sir night, there is much need for flight, she'll kill you if you stay she'll kill you if you fight' i peered into the murky depths of the mirror, the face that looked back at me was that of a young girl 'who are you?' i asked bewildered 'alice liddell, alice liddell, i fell down the rabbit hole into this living hell, she trapped me, she trapped me, with the wood of the tulgey tree' she sang 'can i free you?' she replies with another rhyme 'break the wood, break the wood, the wood of the tulgey tree, then you will set me free' i assumed she was talking about the mirrors carved frame so i broke the frame, the glass shatters it shouldn't, but it does. dark things burst out 'sorry luke' i hear alice call as i am swamped by dark and malevolent spirits. we shout '*i am Limmir!*' then we pull the castle to the ground. you caught me and i'm keeping them in check but they are too strong. go, before they take over. go now, before they kill you" his voice is strained as he fights the demons that share his body, i do not wish to die today so i fly out into the night away from that glass cage i trapped him in,  to hear his tale of how he became what he is.
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hey it's Jazzy
i was wondering if you my fellow writers wanted our community to have another name, and if you wanted our book to be set in a library(as i temporarily have it), a school, an academy, a museum, an emporium, a university or something else

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The wind howled through the trees and whistled through the grass, the land was parched and the animals hoped for rain. Thunder sounded overhead, lightning flashed down, hit a tree and flames leapt in a dangerously deadly dance, spinning, swirling, frolicking, leaping and licking, eating its way through the dry timbers of the dehydrated forest. Still no rain, every time the dry-lightning hit flames erupted unfurling like a fast forward flower and crackling like a whip. Thunder cracked and rumbled, the rain fell at last till with a lot of sizzling all that was left of the ragingly rampant infernos were blackened skeletal trees, clearings and a few half burnt animal carcasses that scattered the forest. The hunters of the forest feasted, even though the fire was out smoke still in cloaked the forest. The wind had stopped as the first lightning bolt hit but no one had noticed in the panic till the rain, scuffles of the creatures and feasting of the forest hunters were the only noises except the odd crack of a branch and crunch of leaves. 
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