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- I don't have anything for now, but this reminded me of:
“He drew a circle that shut me out-
Heretic , rebel, a thing to flout.
But love and I had the wit to win:
We drew a circle and took him In !
From the poem " Outwitted”
― Edwin MarkhamJul 12, 2012
- , I liked it. That story almost made sense to me right up to the very end. I'm not quite sure what you wanted us to carry away from it, but here's what it said to me:
Consumers get together to worship consumption, and then realise to their horror that they don't quite have anything actually there to do so.Jul 22, 2012
- Ah, so I pretty much got what you had intended. No landline anymore was the point--technology has vanished away after being replaced with more convenient options. :)
I liked the humour you've maintained throughout.Jul 26, 2012