There are so many things wrong with this. If you're being serious about this take the time and effort to perfect it. First it sounds like you have lungs of a god because not once did you take a breath (you can hear where you didn't cut it right). Don't rap about other wannabe MCs. You are one. Thirdly, to perfect the no rhyming aspect, you need to execute it with awe. You don't. At all. Don't add in Butters into your song, he made it that much worse. Make a better beat. It's way too weak. I have no idea where the hook is. Which means you have no break. Which means it sounds like a lot of ramble of nothingness. Get some friends who will be honest with you and tell you if you suck. It's called constructive criticism. No point in having people tell you it's good when it's not. If you want to be a real MC and a damn good one you are far from it. Do your research. Perfect you're stuff before you put it out. If you aim to get signed this is not going to get you there.