Hm, some parts are nice. I like how the trills sound. It seems to me though that the melody is lost, because some notes are shortened. And the end: There is so much you can do with it; there are (at least) 3 voices - of course you can't play all at the same time, but here a rather boring, not really a melody, is played. - Please don't mind the critique, it's not that I would play very well. Only this piece I know for quite a while. And still the trills don't sound nearly as well, when I play.
P.S.: Cuting parts together with such a simple piece ... why not play it again?