Shameless self plug  - 
 
Just posted the first article in my company's brand new blog (which I made). Please, I'd love nothing more than for you to read it and tear it apart. Nitpick. Everything you can think of helps me improve as a writer. 
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Great points and good use of visuals. Keep up the good blog work, and after a few more of these you'll have enough material to compile into an eBook (pdf) that you can offer as a free download for contact information, which will help push some qualified leads your way. Looking forward to reading more!
 
I like your style of writing and you've made some interesting points.  I think if you were to give a good and bad example with the 'I / we' concept, and also the 'passive' idea, it would act to highlight and underline your points.  Good article.  Looking forward to seeing more.
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