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i need to know if ths is a good poem..

there is nothing more that i want but look at you all day..
there is nowhere else that i want to be than in your arms to stay..
there is nothing that anyone could want more than how much i want you..
i dream of the day when you will want me too..

is it alright??

thanks just comment what you think and oh i wont be offened.. just voice your opinions :)
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