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Patrick Freivald
Teacher, Writer, Beekeeper...
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Boiling a Delusion
Larry
Crossett is yet another friend from the ABNA forums, and he's brought us a
sample from his thriller, NIGHTMARE DELUSION. Let's see what we can do with it! The Original: Dawn Taylor pushed a wheeled
aluminum ice cart along the brightly lit west corrido...

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(Actually) Boiling Liz Long
So get this: last week
I boiled down Liz Long's zombie story, only I didn't boil it down, I fleshed it
out. (Fleshed. Zombies. Heh.) Here's what I didn't know: Liz wrote the piece as a journal entry found in a group of artifacts from a
zombie outbreak, with...

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Anti-boiling Liz Long
This weeks' sample
comes from Liz Long, who sent me a piece of in-progress zombie fiction to boil
down. Mmmm...boiled zombie.... drools We've got 497 words in the original; let's see what we can do with it. The Original: The hospital survivors
had told us...

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Anti-boiling Lisa Lane
This weeks' sample
comes from Liz Long, who sent me a piece of in-progress zombie fiction to boil
down. Mmmm...boiled zombie.... drools We've got 497 words in the original; let's see what we can do with it. The Original: The hospital survivors
had told us...

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Boiling Cheryl Stewart
This
week's boiling comes from Cheryl Stewart, a long-time friend who has never much
thought about writing for publication, or even for public consumption. She
volunteered as Word Soup victim with 518 words of a story entitled Victoria Livingstone and the F...

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Boiling Susan Taitel
This week's boiling is
a 492-word excerpt from somewhere in the middle of Susan Taitel's WIP. Susan is
another of my amigos from the ABNA forums, who writes middle grade, young
adult, and new adult fiction—mostly fantasy but with toe-dips in the real
world....

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Boiling Jacky Gray
This week's 492-word
sample comes from Jacky Gray, who writes
Action/Adventure stories with a historical feel. Find her books at   http://www.amazon.com/Jacky- Gray/e/B004E5ANH2/ ,
explore her alternate universe at   http://hengistarcher.co.uk/ index.php/ba...

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Boiling Ronald Albury
Ronald Albury was kind enough to
send along the first 464 words—a somewhat truncated prologue—of his novel ENEMY
COMBATANT, based on the script of the same name that won 1 st place
at the 2008 Terror Film Festival. You can find it here: https://www.goodread...

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Want to make someone mad? Waste his/her time.

http://patrickfreivald.blogspot.com/2014/03/sigh.html

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*sigh*
After spending three hours on my latest Word Soup post this Sunday, I send it to the submitter, and just got this reply: "Patrick,  To be perfectly honest, I cannot even remember who you are or what you are supposed to be doing. Whatever it is though...plea...
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