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I'm hoping this chapter is going to be reasonably comprehensible, but I'm not sure. It's going to involve a lot of switching between different groups of characters, which I've not really done before. I usually try to stick with one set, and at most two sets per scene. However, that is clearly not going to work here.
Why'd I have to make up all these characters in the first place?! Stupid converging plot arcs.
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