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ARISA SHIOKAWA
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the summer vacation is over...(very short summary)
 I have not opened this blogger site for about one month...  Now, I would like to write about my summer vacation.  First, I felt this summer vacation was so short because I spent over one month in Canada. I stayed in Canada from Jul.6 to Aug. 17. I studied ...
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Help me!!!!!!
Now that the spring term will soon finish and we have to submit the essay, I found that I could not support thesis statement in body1 and 2. I know everybody is so busy, but I need my classmates help--.
Help me!!!!!!
Help me!!!!!!
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What Makes the Essay Strong?
I was lost making sentences to close my essay. BUT I was amazed by Dan's lecture. The conclusion paragraph is almost the summary of body paragraphs!!!!! When I read Omiai essay, I could understand what I should write as the conclusion. I want to rewrite the...
What Makes the Essay Strong?
What Makes the Essay Strong?
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Reaction to the OMS article...
 As one of the themes in OMS, there is the theme, "There is Honor in Struggle, Defeat & Death". Santiago was struggling against defeat. He could not catch fish for eighty-four days, but he never gave up though he is old. Also, he was struggling with Marlin ...
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Reaction to the OMS article...
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the essence of presentation, 3Bs
I learned how to show the introduction of the book as a presentation. the presentation that Dan showed was so clear. I am not good at this skill, so I will work hard!!! 3Bs Background Biography Bias In fact, I am hard to read OMS, because I read without thi...
the essence of presentation, 3Bs
the essence of presentation, 3Bs
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the life of Hemingway
 At first, I thought Hemingway was one of the greatest authors in the world. However, the article told me that he was not the greatest American writer. He created the preposterous and romantic literary myth. He was also an uncompromising, soulful artist. he...
the life of Hemingway
the life of Hemingway
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C W T
 I have not time to review fallacies perfectly. Even now, however, I cannot make sense of Hasty generalization, Post hoc and Begging the question. I assumed that I could understand all of the general concepts. Hasty generalization means that it has no suffi...
C W T
C W T
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There are so many fallacies...
I wrote about the class in May 28th,    In the class, I learned there is the another way to collect the information of the essay, that is survey! My essay does not need to survey now, but I want to use the survey as the method of looking into the topic deep...
There are so many fallacies...
There are so many fallacies...
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Syllogism!!
 I wrote about the class in May 26th.     First, I did not understand what is syllogisms at that time.  A If the death penalty deterred murder, countries that used it would have fewer murders.  B America uses the death penalty, but has many murders.  C Ther...
Syllogism!!
Syllogism!!
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Keep going...
 I felt the last class was difficult because I did not understand fully about syllogism, and I was confused about the content of the last lesson. Therefore I have to review the content of the last lesson as soon as possible. Also, I learned about analyzing ...
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Keep going...
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