I wrote a thing. Please comment what you think (I don't take criticism personally. I quite open to lots of it).
quiet room, grey walls.
music slowly drips into your brain
veins begin to glow
as the sweet thrill,
the elixir courses through
Sweet, soft sting
rising under your skin
inhale the music into your lungs
light burning your chest and throat…
waves of electricity and euphoria
pulse through every fiber of your body
through your legs
and the tips of your fingers…
to drink the bright galaxies in
the swimming stars
poke the underside of your skin again
music swims through you, burning
it pulses through you
bubbling with light
slowly taken under, as by
a lovely poison.