This is a poem i wrote give me some criticism or compliments plz
when you look up at the sky
see a shooting star pass by
what do you wish for?
i wish for happiness nothing more
2nd night a shooting star
oh so close and yet so far
what i wish is very true
i wish for happiness for me and you
the 3rd night a light shoots on by
fast across the cool night sky
i still do not wish for me
i wish for happiness on my family
the 4th nightfalls to see a light
i make my only wish for that night
this is a wish a wish i send
i wish for happiness for all my friends
5th night i look up in the blink of an eye
i see a shooting star pass by
my final wish has already come true
because i get my happiness......
from being with you.
<3 <3 <3
By: Justice Lowery #poemsiwrite