Advanced Techniques (And Insights) for Jaw-Dropping Dialogue
Dialogue is one of those areas that can transform a story into a delight. How does yours measure up?
In thanks to those who help me keep writing articles, here's a list of questions to help you wield your cast's dynamics to full advantage.
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Every so often, I'm contacted by a writer I don't know who rudely demands that I read something for them.
And I'm sure I'm not the only one.
Our time is precious. If they want us to gift them with some of it, the least they can do is not dispense with pleasantries. Free feedback is a gift, and should be treated as such.
As an editor, this is important to me. I choose my clients carefully, and my expertise is something they pay real money for. When someone demands my attention on their work without a by-your-leave, I'm left flabbergasted. I honestly don't know how to respond.
And you know what? I'll bet that they do it because it works.
Listen, writers. Your writing time isn't something you should sacrifice for the sake of someone who can't even be polite about it. It's not an honor to be told they want your opinion.
They want to use you. If they aren't already your friend, if they aren't offering anything in return, if they don't even bother to be polite... They just want to use you.
And it's not okay.
So writers, please stand up to these bullies. Refuse to play along. You can politely turn them down.
You should only read for someone when you want to. You're interested in the story? You know they respect you? Jump on that read.
And if you're one of the ones doing this? It's not okay. Get to know people first. Be polite. Ask instead of demanding.
For me, the answer (even when the question is polite) is usually going to be no because I'm an editor, but there are a few people that get a yes, and it's because they've made the effort and I know they aren't selfish about it.
Have you experienced this? Tell us your story. (No names, please.)
~the showing of politeness in one's attitude and behavior toward others.
"he had been treated with a degree of courtesy not far short of deference"
~synonyms: politeness, courteousness, good manners, civility, respect, respectfulness...etc.
~a polite "speech" or action, especially one required by convention.
** My definition would be more like:
The superficial courtesies of diplomatic exchanges! OR
Courtesy to one person, may be perceived an honour to another, if it's received with Humility.
How deep is your character's connection to their corner of the world? How can you make it deeper?
Check out this quick read.
Mine's liminal. Mmmm.
Tell me a story.
Write a scene inspired by this image. Make sure something is happening so it's not just a vignette.
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Last year, I got really tired of non-writers following my collection of image prompts and posting comments unrelated to writing, sometimes with nasty reactions when I corrected it so that the focus was on the writing rather than the pretty.
So I burnt out on image prompts and dismantled the collection.
Now I'm ready to dive back into the wonderful world of writer imagination and varied perspective. Every writer has a unique take on each image, and it's a beautiful thing.
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Thank you. This post has more helpful information than some of the writing courses I’ve taken. ~ Sherian Groppini
An excellent article. As comprehensive as anything you'll find in a how-to book. ~ Richard Van Anderson
Some of the stuff you've written about writing has floored me with its incisiveness and concrete practicality. I could immediately see that you had a grasp of the craft that I didn't even know could exist, and I've been reading about the craft of writing since my early teens. ~ Shanna Mann
I've been thinking a lot lately about how to explain the creation of curiosity instead of confusion. For storytelling, it's especially important for first lines. It's the ability to imply enough that the situation is guessable. Norman Rockwell's Happy Birthday Mrs. Jones is a perfect example.
(And yes, this piece is a bit out of date and the museum is now slotted for Los Angeles instead. Either way, I hope to go see it sometime. Or many times.)
- Goals are more powerful than rules. Know your goal and you can discard the rule.
- The more you understand about your story, your characters, your world, the more inspiration and options are open to you.
- Deep, complex characters are the strongest, most fascinating characters you can have.
- Never stop learning. Never assume someone knows everything about the craft. Never assume you know "enough." Never assume it will be easy.
- Your process will likely be unique. Follow the path that works for you, for your story.
- Try new things. It's part of learning, and it's part of finding your process.
- Plot and character are equally important. Each fuels the other.
- Understand the rules to break them effectively. This ties back to knowing your goals.
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