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hi, dear
i wan to sell my the scenario . do you byu it or no?
if you don't like buying it , you will have to say wahy you don't. please help me to sell my scenarion.
 
with best regards

Introduction

My name is Seyyd Mohammad Mirakbari. I am author of civilian scenario. I set 14 conditions to sell it and according to the contract, buyer of the scenario perfectly confirms and performs these conditions. If you don’t accept a number of these conditions or all of them, I can’t sell my scenario. I have delivered you an abstract of my scenario translated from the Persian in to English. I suggest you to study it correctly. If you tend to speak with me, you can contact me by phone number or email and a professional translator who is thoroughly proficient in English and Persian language, and who can help us in speaking.
If you won't buy it, I want you to explain your reasons about it completely by email. If you want to buy it you must send your proposal price by email. Mohammad_mirakbari@yahoo.com
Thank you 
Phone number: 00982537724257
Mobile: 00989127598941
 
1. The first condition: in the civilian film, my first name and last name are shown and read correctly as a film author and shown the first name and last name of Mohammad Eliasi as a counselor.
2. The second condition: sex appeal scenes, sex dress and the sex relations aren’t added to scenario and civilian’s film.
3. The third condition: the name of scenario and civilian film should not be changed.
4. The forth condition: Islamic dignities and veil of male and female characters of Muslim in the scenario and civilian film are correctly performed. 
5. The condition: According to logical facts and necessary, make some of the changes in the scenario and civilians film, so that this changes don’t break the conditions of contents I scenario. 
6. The sixth condition: correctly according to my conditions for selling a movie must be made from the civilian scenario. 
7. Seventh condition: make the movies from the civilian scenario so that it should be without the sexual advertisement, homosexuality, pederasty fornication, bawdyhouse, worshipping devil, liquor wine, dance, gambling house, dance hall and new my stoicism ,none of them apparent. 
8. Eighth condition: make the movie from the civilians of scenario so that never humiliates Muslims and do sacrilege and don’t show the evil face of Islam and Muslims for watcher and listener in film.
9. Ninth condition: scenario buyer won't be permitted to sell it. 
10. Tenth condition: the copy right of civilian scenario belongs to me; I have a right to write the story, novel and play of scenario. I also have a copy right and only I have a right to sale it. 
11. Eleventh condition: the translation to civilian scenario into Pashto and Dari language is undertaken by the buyer. And it should be without any changes and mistake. The scenario belong to me before you make it, please send me two copies of scenario translated and typed completely without censorship by argent post, you are in charge of paying its cost.
12. Twelfth conditions: if a number of my condition or all of them for selling don’t be performed or become defective or be changed, the buyer won’t have a right to make it. I have a right to sell it. Buyer’s scenario doesn’t be in right to sell it.
13. Thirteenth condition: if some parts of the film having made from the scenario , won't be corresponded to my conditions for selling, the buyer must pay ten millions for fine of selling in addition to pay 2 $ I court according to law. 
14. Fourteenth condition: after the end of the showing of civilian film in the movie, you must send me a pressed tabula from behind the scene of making the civilian’s film and a pressed tabula of civilian film without making a censorship and pay in by express post. 


Abstract of the civilian scenario
  The writer: Seyyd Mohammad Mr. Akbari 
Alex is an American soldier who is service in military in the south of Afghanistan. Sara, his wife, doesn’t satisfy her husband to service in Afghanistan. Because she is worried about Alex, she doesn’t want to lose her husband at war like her mother’s and father’s. Alex is interested in being military attempting to calm Sara temporarily. One day, Alex was driving toward his house. He is careless about his driving at the moment. His car is near an accident with his daughter, but the Fazel rapidly save’s Alex daughter’s life without Alex girls and himself injured in an accident. The next day Alex with his family go to Fazele’s house to thank him for this, His house is opposite Fazele’s house. In this meeting Fazel and Alex introduce themselves. “I am Afghan business man” Fazel said. Fazel and his family have come to America visiting their families. Alex said that “he is military soldier to service in Afghanistan.” Alex and Fazel will return to Afghanistan in spring. The first act of play, Alex treats the co-fighters and afghan’s civilians kindly. His event saved the life of Afghan’s young boy and young boy’s family in the event of suicide at talk. Fazel lives kindly with his family in jarring time. Once he takes a hospital wounded civilian man. One night Alex and his co-fighters attacked the secret place of some of the Talibans. Alex and his co-fighters captured Taliban who was alive and healthy. Tow his co-fighters on the order of operation’s commander to torture the Talebanian officer to confess their ammunition depot. Alex is going to prevent this action but one soldier keeps him from doing. Alex argues with the soldier, he get upset about their action so he swears that never tortures someone. Sara goes to brother’s house that her brother died in Iraq war Sara understand their problem. And she began to calm her brother’s wife. When she returns home, write the letter for Alex and asked him to resign from his post in army and fined the other jobs in American. Alex gets upset about the torment of Talibans officer. He receives the letter and read it. Fazel’s brother and brother's wife return their home, that is, Kabul, invite them to birthday celebration that are hold at their home in south of Afghanistan, Because of having a child. Fazel and Alex accept their invitation. In The next day when Fazel’s family get ready to go to the celebration with brother, Fazel faces with work and speak about his work with his wife, and asked his brother going along with his wife to home, after the work, he is going to go to house. When Fazel finishes his work he goes to the brother’s house. When he is near the brother’s house, fighter plane lack of crew bombed the village. Several houses and his brother’s house are aimed by plane. Fazel sees the destruction of village and his brother’s house from the short distance. 
[The first point turning and end of the first act of the civilian’s film]
On the tomb of his families, he swears to takes their revenge on enemies. Fazel goes to the village in south of Afghanistan where is under the control of Taliban and visit his uncle who is Talibani commander. He joins their group and become a member of Taliban group. One day Fazel’s uncle was going to visit Taleban leader, at the village controlling by Talibans. He take Fazel along to village, when the Fazel arrived here, realized fighter plane was attaching to village, so shout to inform his co-fighter of danger and save their life after this adventure, Fazel went out the city at the south of Afghanistan to do operation, he correctly performed his duty and the operation is done properly performed his duty and the operation is done properly Fazel accidently met the Shiite old man who is his former worker, running away from the Afghan police by helping old man. He came back his uncle’s new shelter and kills the Afghan woman who was in governmental post that it was the only operation who couldn’t do it correctly. Because the woman was similar to his wife, he couldn’t kill her, so his co-fighters get aware of his action, when one of his co-fighter was going to kill woman physically conflict happened between them, but his rival kill the woman finally.
When Fazel and his co-fighters come bake to their shelter, Fazel understand that his uncle is angry about his action so his uncle speaks with Fazel about his action. Since his uncle love’s the Fazel so look for an excuse to explain away his neglect. For the first time Alex observe that one of his commanders has a good behavior with Afghan civilians and even help them. After the Taliban commander is tormented by his co-fighter, and his commanders, Alex never capers no one of Talibans. He decided to kill them. One day when Fazel’s uncle visit’s several Talibani commanders, he selects replacement in a last consolation. In a middle road, fighter's plane of American attacked the car of his uncle and his fellow’s motorcycle, so they are killed by fighter plane. Fazel and his co-fighters are in formed on their Death. The next day , they go to the new shelter and invite the commander to select replacement in a new shelter. One of the Talibans comes to a new shelter. Fazel is introduced as a commander in his uncle’s group by the Taliban commander. Alex services in a small base of America’s military in a mountain us area of south of Afghanistan. One day, American military plane was flying with slow speed and low height in this area, when this plane was flying in this village that is near the military base is heard the firing sound of several Berno gun. Military plane fire’s at the people of village who stand in an alley of village in front of a house. Alex , commander and several people go to the village and ask  them what is the cause of firing. One of the people from the village says that there was a wedding at the village. The people according to the custom shoot a gun to the air, when the bride was getting into the car, the plane shot at us. The group of people gathered together at the mosque of village. They speak about this event with elder and the end of session, some people of victim family was going to be a member of Talebani group. 
[The Second turning point and the end of the second screen of civilian scenario.] 
A few days later, Fazel and several his soldiers attach on the small base of Alex and his co-fighter. Fazel and two persons of his co-fighters stayed alive. Fazel says the one of his co-fighters stayed alive. Fazel says the one of his co-fighter escaped from the4 battle field. Fazel commands the young person to escape and the other Talibanians is killed by order of Fazel. Fazel kills one of the Alex’s co-fighters. Fazel is captured by one of the Alex’s co-fighter. While the young Talibani man was running away, two Afghan teenagers see him and spoke with him and take the Talibani man with themselves to the village that is near the military base. When the Alex and his co-fighter take the body (remain) of American military killed and Fazel to the military base, all of the American military go there in base. One of the Alex’s co-fighter is kicking the Fazel. Alex and one of his co-fighter disagree with this soldier’s action. But commander’s base and the others co fighters support his action because Fazel has killed his friend. Alex aims the gun at them so it causes the soldier doesn’t kick the Fazel. Translator's soldier is agreeing with Alex. He come at the Alex and come down on the side of Alex. Survivors of victims are going to be the member of Talibani group. They take up arms and the young Talibanian commander commands them to attach the small base of Alex and his co-fighters. All of the America’s militaries are killed except Alex and translator’s soldier. They are capered alive and healthy. When Fazel becomes free, Fazel and Alex know each other, they speak together . Fazel says what is the reason for joining to Talibani group? 
Fazel says that you was disagree with killing and tormenting, so I don’t kill you but I have two conditions for my action. The Fazel’s condition is that they take an oath to resign their post in army. Translator soldier doesn’t accept this condition. Fazel kills the soldier. He aims the gun at Alex giving threats so he accepts his condition. 
After the time, Alex and his family take part in burial of his ex- friend and co-fighter, James. Fazel and his group attach several American’s military that are being cruised. They kill several American’s military, the other people are wounded and then they get away from the battle field. At the end of scenario, Alex’s job is police. Fazel is healthy as Alex. He has sat on the top of a mountain in the southern mountainous of Afghanistan and he looks at the picture of his wife and his children and such is a Talibani commander.
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Steven Kirwan: Executive Director at American Screenwriters Association. The Official Organiztion of Emerging Screenwriters
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Steven Kirwan is the Executive Director of the American Screenwriters Association (ASA), the definitive organization for emerging screenwriters. We help screenwriters hone their skills so they can reach the pinnacle of success.We have a driving commitment to educating our members on how the industry works, and how to capitalize on the opportunities that are available. We are a community of equals, and strive to share the combined knowledge of our members to help improve each individually. We seek new avenues to promote and market our members’ scripts, and develop new relationships with industry leaders to increase member visibility.
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