offers fantastic critiques and this image is my response to his challenge after I had the middle image critiqued.
you can see the original critique on his blog herehttp://sergeys.us/photography-critique-brian-morena/
He wanted to see some additional context to the photograph picking up on the fact that it was part of a broader series. I found the challenge very rewarding. It was tough to find images that featured the same subject which lent themselves to cropping into a triptych because I try to always fill the frame but it was even more difficult to create a story when I hadn't planned one from the beginning. The big thing I learned was how important it is to visualize a story when I plan on photographing a cohesive series of a particular subject.
If you have a particular image you would like critiqued check +Sergey Sus
out. I find it difficult to get valuable feedback and I was happy to learn something about my own photography along the way.
Thanks again Sergry