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I realized the preview image gets cutoff.... Anyway, INKtober original art for sale, please help support my art, it would mean a lot for even a reblog :) All monies going towards my computer :)

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My new film HAPPY FUN ROOM is live on Youtube! Check it out and spread it around, if you're so inspired!

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Happy Bird day to everyone that's celebrating. Enjoy yourselves, try not to get too stuffed, spend time with the family, and don't get arrested. :P
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What?!?!?!  Don't get arrested?!?!?!  But that means you weren't up to something fun and enjoyable...not listening to this anymore...
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Halloween Short Stories

I wrote this last October, and it's one of those I liked enough to put it in my "Will edit it again after enough time away from it" pile. Comments welcomed. #halloweenshortstories #Fiction

Baby in the Bath Tub

“Somethin’s wrong wit’ Mama,” Charlotte blurted out, head buried in her hands, moping at the kitchen table. “She’s possessed! A she devil. It ain’t right!”

“No, she ain’t.” Joseph replied, tears crystalizing in his eyes.

“Somethin’s not right, Joe! We can’t deny it no more. Don’t you remember what she said to us?”

Joseph nodded; he did remember. They were at the kitchen table, the same one they were at now. His mother, sister, and he were carrying on like old friends. Nothing out of the ordinary. Casual conversation dominated the airwaves: talks of local news, daily events, and gossip flowed from ear to ear. Then Charlotte got up and made her way to the sink to wash her dish. His mother looked at her for a second, looked down, and then into the living room before returning her gaze to Charlotte. That’s when she shocked them. That’s when she spoke those words into existence that would come back to haunt Charlotte.

“You lost that baby in the bath,” she said. Time froze. It was the lack of emotion that really set the tone. No one reacted for a few seconds. How were they to? Joseph held his breath, waiting for everything to explode.

“What, mama?” Charlotte giggled, unsure of what was going on.

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Halloween Short Stories

I wanted to start this earlier, but eh,  had things going on. Anyway, to fit the holidays, I'm going to reshare some old stories that vaguely fit the spirit of the upcoming "holiday" of Halloween. Enjoy and comments are welcomed. #HalloweenShortStories #Fiction

Game Theory: Submission & Sacrifice

Shards of green splattered onto the stark white floors, coloring every few inches with sharp, glimmering glass. Black sludge splotched the sky blue walls as if it had come fresh from a shot down alien’s body. An alarm penetrated the stale, distilled air, stirring up any sleeping creature with one or more working ears. An incident had taken place. The sanctuary of those who watched had been tainted, and the world was no longer safe. Something had escaped, and it was viral, and it was deadly. It was fear where none used to exist.

Feet pounded against the metal floors of narrow corridors, searching through small windows of passing doors to make sure each captive was still behind their isolated cells. Nothing had moved, no one had fled, yet panic wafted through those in the know, sending them into a paranoid frenzy. Those who watched stomped up and down the halls, their frequency increasing with their caution. Every noise was analyzed; every ounce of known information was scanned and rechecked, but nothing calmed their nerves. Something had worked against them. They had become targeted. For the first time in many years, they were not on top of the events happening around them.

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Script Review & Opinions

So I finally read the Dr. Strange script by Alex Cox from, I believe, 1990 or so, and I wrote down my thoughts on it as I was reading it. What follows will be my (long) opinions and ratings on the script and how well I think it pulls off portraying Dr. Strange. If you want the short hand version, then I'll sum it up here: (lowly) Passable. #DoctorStrange #UnUsedMovieScript

Dr. Strange

What a mess of a script. That's my simple way of saying it wasn't great, but it also wasn't too bad. It was definitely written as a summer, big budget movie. Ton of magic and display of power, quick moving, and yet very little time is spent on the actual characters. You get some back story on the 5 or 6 main characters (I'm being generous with that number) and the movie spends most of its time speeding from point A to point Z with very little breathing room.  There's nothing there to get invested in. There's no thinking to be had.

1. Dr. Strange and Wong don't come off as the characters I've grown to know today. Strange isn't particularly arrogant, though he does have some know-it-all tendencies. He also comes off as someone who is not as experienced and as powerful as perhaps he should be, which is fitting since his master is still around for 10-15 minutes of the script.

2. Wong was a bit of a miss for me. Sometimes he spoke broken English and sometimes he didn't. At first, I thought this was intentional to throw off certain characters, but it happened at random times. He also contributes so little to the film's narrative that he could have been written out completely or replaced with a random, new character and the same goals would be accomplished. He's basically just a glorified cameo. I know fans would get mad if he weren't there or if he was outright replaced, but there's nothing character worthy about his inclusion at all.

3. The script introduces us to a new character named Tanya who is Strange's book agent. She also happens to have latent magical abilities she has no idea about that pop up occasionally via dreams or random actions the script gives little context to. She serves as the unwilling sidekick and realist of the film. She also functions as a damsel and a POV character. She's the movie's Jubilee (X-men TAS).

4. The villains are bland. There's nothing to write home about for any of them, including Dormammu and Mordo. The four Medieval demons serve as nothing more than magical fodder, which leads to some of the more spectacular battles/events Strange finds himself in.

5. I liked how varied the magic is in the movie, and I did like how some of it played out. The astral/magical battle between Astral Strange and Mordo and the Four Medieval demons was a highlight for me. I also enjoyed the Baal/dolls/car scene where Strange got to use his desert plant magic to help save Tanya. Basically, this ties into my point that the villains, specifically the demons, were there for nothing more than to show off big FX scenes from time to time. Very "X-men: First Class" like.

6. One of the most disappointing scenes for me was the battle between Strange/Mordo/The Four Demons while Dormammu was trying to break free from the other dimension he was in. It was solved too quickly and only resulted in Tanya having another damsel moment. So much of the movie leads up to this event that I was led to believe it'd play a bigger part in the film's climax and conclusion. It didn't.

7. The final battle between Strange and a Dormammu empowered Mordo was a spectacular FX magic fest, but ultimately, I found myself bored at that point while reading it. I'm sure it would translate better on screen, but it was there that I essentially gave up on the script ever finding a heart. It did give us a last minute plot twist with Tanya, but it was a "been there, done that" cliche that barely pinged my interest.

8. I have very little to say about the resolution or the denouement. I have as much to say about it as the script decided to dedicate to it.

9. I did like how the writer (Alex Cox) tried to tie in the, then upcoming, millennium with the rise of Dormammu and his plans. It set an effective timeline and frame of reference.

Overall, the script was passable but disappointing. I liked the varied usage of magic, but there was nothing engaging about the story or the characters enacting it. It was your standard summer fare. I would have enjoyed it more if the characters were more rounded, Wong had more of an impact, Mordo was actually explored in a meaningful way, or Dr. Strange had more of his arrogant flair. There were moments in the script I would have cut out completely, and I'd definitely do away with the entire "Tanya" subplot. Fortunately, there was no love story in sight, which I actually approve of. If I had to apply a rating to this script, it'd be a 5 on a 10 point scale. I can see why they passed on making it.
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MARVEL MOVIE TSUNAMI!!! :-)

Here's the list!

Captain America: Civil War - May 6th 2016
Doctor Strange  - November 4th, 2016 
Guardians Of The Galaxy 2 – May 5th, 2017
Thor: Ragnarok – July 28th, 2017
Black Panther - November 3rd, 2017 – starring Chadwick Boseman
Captain Marvel – July 6th 2018 – featuring Carol Danvers
Inhumans – November 2nd 2018.
Avengers: Infinity War Part 1 – May 4th 2018
Avengers: Infinity War Part 2 - May 2019

Feel free to FREAK OUT!!!

Oh and Black Panther will appear in Captain America : Civil War

#marvelstudios #marvelmovies #marvelcinematicuniverse  
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Halloween Short Story

This story is one I just completed (as of yesterday), and it's not in its best state yet, but I wanted to share it. Enjoy and thoughts welcomed. #halloweenshortstories #Fiction

Death Marched Beyond My Dreams

Death's bony fingers had pilfered my dreams. He touched them, stealing every scene from me and turning them into nightmares. Innocence was taken, and there was nothing I could do about it. Dreams about family, about people I had only known through their creative works, had been tainted. Death's ghosts hovered around them. Their presence darkened every corner. Shadows followed us all, but they were not our own. These were spirits, our lifelines. Death had measured our days, and only my eyes were witnesses. My dreams, and the people within them, were the playthings of a bedeviled mind.

I can still feel my heart race whenever I think about it. All those half-covered, shadowed faces sauntering towards their doom. People just living their lives unaware of the waiting reaper whose minions trailed their every step, pushing them ever so closer to the scythe craving to carve out their souls. I can see it in my mind’s eye, blurry yet clear enough that I understand the simplicities involved. I’m not fooled; I’ve been chosen to experience this. Suffering alone, I get to behold everyone around me—including myself—walk to the toll of a bell unheard. Shuffling like zombies, the herd danced along to the march of the living dead.

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This story is one I just completed (as of yesterday), and it's not in its best state yet, but I wanted to share it. Enjoy and thoughts welcomed. #halloweenshortstories #Fiction

Death Marched Beyond My Dreams

Death's bony fingers had pilfered my dreams. He touched them, stealing every scene from me and turning them into nightmares. Innocence was taken, and there was nothing I could do about it. Dreams about family, about people I had only known through their creative works, had been tainted. Death's ghosts hovered around them. Their presence darkened every corner. Shadows followed us all, but they were not our own. These were spirits, our lifelines. Death had measured our days, and only my eyes were witnesses. My dreams, and the people within them, were the playthings of a bedeviled mind.

I can still feel my heart race whenever I think about it. All those half-covered, shadowed faces sauntering towards their doom. People just living their lives unaware of the waiting reaper whose minions trailed their every step, pushing them ever so closer to the scythe craving to carve out their souls. I can see it in my mind’s eye, blurry yet clear enough that I understand the simplicities involved. I’m not fooled; I’ve been chosen to experience this. Suffering alone, I get to behold everyone around me—including myself—walk to the toll of a bell unheard. Shuffling like zombies, the herd danced along to the march of the living dead.

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365 Project, Day 37
All right.  This might be strange, but I think it would be awesome if I could make it to 1000 hits on my blog for this month.  For nothing more than my vanity.  So, throw me out there to your friends. Hopefully, they don't think I'm TOOOO weird.
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