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Some people think that spending a lot on holding wedding parties, birthday parties and other celebrations is just a waste of money. Others, however, think that these are necessary for individuals and the society. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
There are some moments in our life that need to be memorable. We get married once in our life, we have birthdays once a year; therefore many people think that spending in such occasions has no limitation. On the other hand a respected equivalent number of people think that it is just a waste of money. Each group has its own reasons that will be discussed.
The first group thinks about enjoying life up to the maximum possible. There are certain moments in their life that must be enormously celebrated, so they can recall it with enjoyment .They have to invite many friends in spacious areas, bring the finest food and drinks and maybe a famous singer. Many people of this group are wealthy so they may argue that it is affordable for them.
Meanwhile, the second group considers having simple pictures with beloved ones is enough to recall every special moment in our life. Saving the money for a new couple to settle a house is much better than spending it in a wedding party, they may argue. Many people of this group are financially incapable to spend a fortune in one night, although some rich people have the same thinking.
In my opinion we must be in a mid distance between both opinions, celebrating a special occasion with close family and friends is always a glee that needs spending more money to do something out of the routine, but extravagance is a bad behaviour that will not add any extra enjoyment to our celebrations.