You are always welcome :)
Feedback can seem quite harsh at times, especially if it's a "fan creation" as it's easy to take it all personally, but I will always try to balance the negatives with positives, and all feedback is given in order to try to help you improve.
As for "only" a fan-made book.....I've seen some cracking fan-made items some of which are better than non-fan made stuff because unlike people who are paid to write/draw you actually care about your product.
At some point I hope to bring my Legend: Ancient Stones setting to life in a book such as this, and I hope that when that day comes I'll have help and support to make it worthwhile.
Now, I am pretty damn busy at the current time, but if you need my services as a proofreader I am happy to give my time for a namecheck and a free copy :) But it might be a short while before I can help as I have other things to do first.
Keep up the great work! :D