Just posted the first article in my company's brand new blog (which I made). Please, I'd love nothing more than for you to read it and tear it apart. Nitpick. Everything you can think of helps me improve as a writer.
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- Great points and good use of visuals. Keep up the good blog work, and after a few more of these you'll have enough material to compile into an eBook (pdf) that you can offer as a free download for contact information, which will help push some qualified leads your way. Looking forward to reading more!Dec 21, 2012
- I like your style of writing and you've made some interesting points. I think if you were to give a good and bad example with the 'I / we' concept, and also the 'passive' idea, it would act to highlight and underline your points. Good article. Looking forward to seeing more.Dec 22, 2012