Anyone watching this who thinks it looks a little bit silly, do a search for "Black Widow movie SNL." SNL did a sketch about Scarlett Johansson getting to do a Black Widow movie and it's so spot on, almost exactly the same as this trailer, that I almost suspect the writers at SNL had a leaked script for this trailer.
Everything about this looks amazing. I can't tell who is kissing Barbara in that one scene. It doesn't look like Jim but it could be. However, I don't really care. Since she's the worst. Also, it's great not to see Fish in any of these scenes. She is also the worst. Jim Gordon's intensity in these scenes is amazing. He's such a sport. Kind of wish Nigma would have stayed good a little while longer. He was fun on the right side. Alas.
I'm bummed that you did the VC line and the thing at the end, because without those there's a decent chance that some pack of liberal undergrads at Haverford would have raised a storm about this as if it were real.
Some quick feedback: 25 seconds into this thing and nothing interesting has happened. Attention is short on YouTube. This isn't a movie preview where you have a captive audience. Put that junk at the end.
It's done nicely, like a Union Hall knock off, but then you go in and the stupid football game is blaring out of their dumb flatscreens. If you want to be a sports bar then why did you waste all the money on the hardwood? Throw out some cheap chairs, tape up some Coors posters and be done with it.